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1. Logistics: make up class, writing workshop, LINE group 
2. Introducing essay 1
3. Oral and written quiz on revision and editing
4. Using revision and editing checklist to evaluate your previous writing: weekly outside journal and essay from 111
5. Revision workshop/application

Revision VS. editing

Workshop poll section 1 Workshop poll section 2

Revision and editing checklist

Pre-revision essay

Final essay